Friday, November 20, 2009

Two Islands

Write a persuasive piece that would encourage people to settle in either Greenel or Graynel at the time of their development. The purpose is to encourage people to move to the island. What does the island have to offer? What values does the island uphold?

35 comments:

  1. Greenel is the place to be. We have green fields and lots of food and the materials to make everything we will ever need. We are not rich but we are clean. Graynel is great, if you want to pollute your lungs and have your childs first posession be a gas mask. Come to Greenel and you will never regret it.
    Bobbi-Jo C.
    KPM

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  2. i think that you should stay at graynel because it has a blue sky and its green all around and if you stay at graynel you will have a wonderful time.
    Andrew.c
    k.p.m

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  3. in my opion if you were to move I would tell you to move to Greenel. I would tell you to move to Greenel becasue it is a much happier then Graynel, everyone is nice to everyone and no one is more important then anyone they are all equal to each other and Greenel is much more of a green place.

    Greenel is a much happier place becasue Greenel has nice people. No one has to leave the island becasue they have all they could ever want and they don't need to live off of what they have but Graynel's people have to leave the island to get good work even though no one on Greenal would buy anything. and no one is more important then anyone in any way or form so they are all equal.

    Greenel is a much nicer place and is greener because in Greenel they have no factories or building that produce things and gases that are bad for they air and environment.

    Autumn
    KPM

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  4. i think you should live in Greenel because it is a better/healther place to live.you don't have to ware a gas mask every day.the only time you see the blue sky or the trees, and on graynel you can only see maybe a small thing of grass.the people at greenel grow the food and make the things they need them shelfs so they save more money. they also have a greener land

    brittney b
    kpm

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  5. i think you should stay at greenal because it has a blue sky and green trees and grass. if you stay at greenal you will have a wonderful time and it will be a great getaway.
    Gill.G
    k.p.m

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  6. Where Would You Rather Be?

    Would you rather live in beauty or beast? I know I would chose beauty. In this persuasive piece i will persuade you to chose Greenel over Greynel with these three reasons it is beter looking, healthier for you, and you'll learn to be a better person living there.

    Firstly, Greenel is way better looking. Would you want to live in a place that makes you look bad. If you live in a place that looks bad,you will look just as bad.

    Secondly, it's way healthier to live in a place with fresh air that a place that's ingulfed in toxic fumes. People today are always trying to get healthy and make healthy choices. Let me tell you, chosing to live there is a very bad health choice.

    Lastly, by living in Greenel you learn to be a better person. You understand what the value of a dollar is and understand that money isn't as important as family and friends.

    Greenel is straight up a better place to live and it would be kind of dumb to chose to live in a place that has so many bad things going against it. Greenel rocks!

    Meaghan W
    KPM

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  7. Greenel is the island for you they are not rich but they are not pour.At greenel there are green feilds and all the stuff that you will need for a healthy happy life.

    Shawndelle
    K.P.M.

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  8. The best island to settle on would be Greenel. The people of Greenel have a President and he/she announced when they first arrived, "Once we are here in the middle of the ocean, and our island is only so big and no bigger, we will all have to work very hard to tend it and keep it as lovely as it is today. If we are careful and wise we will be able to grow our own food and learn to make the other things we need to be happy and comfortable."
    The island is still green and fresh, unlike Graynel. The island is polluted from all of the plants(not trees) and buildings. There are no parks at Graynel because the island is full of buildings. Greenel has green fields and a blue sky. Greenel is the best island to vacation on.

    Haley K
    KPM

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  9. I would want two live in greenel because its beutifull and clean and your breathing in fresh air not smoke and grunge all that and thats y i would love two live in greenel.

    Brad w
    kpm

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  10. I think we should live in greenel becasue its a happy land and cares for our enviroment they make everything by hand and cares for everything and everyone! live there it health for you and for the world.

    Melissa T.
    K.P.M

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  11. I think you should live in greenal because it has NO polution and they live in a lifestyle that does not involve living in a place that has factories that give off poloution and they just get up in the morning when the sun comes up and they garden and keep there island green and when the sun goes down they go to bed and they do the same everyday but in graynal they get up go to work in there CARS leave work go home in there CARS, and do whatever else they do its just like the city when you drive into the city all you smell is this nasty poloution,
    all throughout the city and when you look at the sky you see GRAY! but at greenal you see nice blue skys and clear blue water, i would like to live in greenal, what about you?

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  12. I would recomend for you to live in greenal because greenal has NO poloution it is all GREEN the skys are blue and the grass is green, an the other hand graynal has malls. BUT would you rather live in a place with malls where you have to wear gas maskes or in a place that you have clear blue skys and water that is blue and clean? living in graynal is like passing by a city and all you smell is the poloution! all the water is GRAY and the sky is GRAY its boring wouldent you rather live in a place with green grass blue skys and clear blue water? i would like to live in greenal what about you?

    Savanna M
    KPM P.S

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  13. i think we should live on greenal because it is way better than graynal because on greenal has way more trees and its looks way better to live on.

    troy p
    watt

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  14. I think that Greenal is a great place to live but Graynel would be a great spot to hang out with friends and go shopping.
    I think Greenal would a beautiful place to go to. I wonder if Greenal and graynel are real places.

    Katrina. M.
    Watt

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  15. Ok, Well I think I would rather live on Greenel because personally I do not like the City AT ALL, I can't stand eing there for a day, let alone livinng there... And also if you lived on Graynell, there would be no room to do anything fun, be alone, or have any privacy. There is too many buildings cars roads... even factories! I would honestly have room to do the things I want then to live in a smog filled city, even if it meant having to grow your own crops and things. Anyways thats my thoughts

    Nicole
    Watt

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  16. I thinkj you should live in Greenal instead of graynal.(And no I didn't make a mistake by not putting a capital on graynal but did on Greenal.)graynal is never rained on and dirty 24-7. As of Graynal is buetiful and sunny gets the occasoinal rain but when it deos it is beutiful. Want more info? Go to Nelsons literacy book.
    Wolf caller

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  17. Katrina, Greenel and Graynel are kind of real. Greenel is Muskoka and Toronto is Graynel.
    Bobbi-Jo C.
    KPM

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  18. This comment is for Nicole.
    I completely agree with you, i don't like the city, and you would have no space to anything and you wouldn't have any privacy. These are all huge problems for me because i would be really sad if i didn't have my own space.I think you are right, Greenel is way better!

    Meaghan W
    KPM

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  19. Heyyyyy:)
    I think that you should live on Greenel cause Greenel is nice they are green and you feel apreciated and included everyone knows each other and cares about each other :P Graynel isnt that great because its everything you guys had already said Its icky and gross and gasmasks are so not in fashion ;)Live in Greenel you will live better
    Peace out and Go Green :)

    L.O.
    Watt

    P.S.:Friends are better then money:)

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  20. This is Keana I would live on greenal because its most like Muskoka but I would like to boat over to graynel every once and a while so that I could go SHOPPING!! and hang out with friends. I think graynel is a smog filled city like Toronto,though it is fun to be in,I wouldnt live in it. :p

    Keana from Watt!

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  21. If I were to pick one of these Islands I would have to pick Greenel and Greynel 1- I would love to live in greenel Because it is very simular to Muskoka, manny lake,wonderful sceanery and everything there is natural I would also chose Greynel because there would be manny shooping malls and amazing store to see, also because with a highly populated place there would be stars there too and concerts to watch, honestly I am torn between whitch one I would really want to live on if only there was a place that was mixed with both things I like, many store to shop, stars and beatuiful lakes and trees..

    Paige
    Watt Public school :P

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  22. I think that Greenal will be a better place to live and hang out with friends. and you wouldnt have to waer gas mask all the time like Graynel has to. Plus you would have such a better health.
    Tristan
    Watt

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  23. if you wantg to go to a place where every streat is paved with shops then you belong on greynel...
    if you love wide open fealds then you need greenel so that you can live with wide fealds and nice cotteges that dont cost a thing. so be where you whant and leave it to yourself not me to decide for you
    greg
    watt... did i say something wrong?

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  24. Alright, so here comes my opinion.
    I'm stuck in between. I love to visit the city, but I don't think I could live there. Too much noise, too crowded, and not enough nature.
    If I couldn't escape to the woods with my iPod or walk down to the lake to chuck rocks or just let my dog go for a run, I don't think I could survive. I need my fresh air, walks at night to see the stars. You don't get that in the city, there's too much light pollution and minumum 5 lane highways.

    So what if you have snow to shovel or cold or mosquitos? Those things are small things to sufferr through for the freedom and quiet we have in the country.

    Same goes for Greenal and Greynal-- visit the city, but don't wear a gas mask all the time. Have actual AIR to breath.

    Later,
    Shauna Cate
    Watt

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  25. i would live on greenal

    jacob.w

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  26. i would rather live in greenle because you can snowboard thare



    Stefan.M
    Watt

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  27. I am such an outdoorsie person so (obviously)I would rather Greenal more than Greynal. It's sunny and green and WARM!!! but Greynal is filled with smoke and you don't get fresh air.
    so yeah
    PEICE!

    Liz
    Watt. PS.

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  28. I think Greenel is a nice place & it allso looks like a happy place
    Seaan D
    watt

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  29. I think that graynel would be better although the smog and stuff there is a lot of things to do and if a world war was to start greenel would be left defenceless aleast graynel would have a chance.
    jesse
    watt

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  30. i like to snowbord and play hockey, so I would rather live in Graynel to make lots of money. Then I would go and buy property on Greenel or buy an island like it for myself.

    Braeden G
    Watt

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  31. i will live in greenel because you dont need some things that graynel made because you already have the three things that you need hands, feet, and a brain

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  32. i think graynel is a nice place to visit and go shoppin there and stuff but greenal is a nicer place to live with all that greenery LOL :) :P <3

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  33. Live in Greenal. Greynal is full of cunts.

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  34. greenal in better than graynel
    in many ways

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  35. I would live in Greenel because over there you can relax and breathe the fresh air. With their luscious green grass, blooming flowers, and the tropical air,it creates a very nice soothing atmosphere and makes you feel happy.

    Katrina
    Windsor, ON

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